I finished LP feedback on a thesis and got 5/5 (see image). Then I went and used the thesis tool again and got bad feedback (see text below image). It has happened already and it feels I am in a loop and have to start again. Any suggestions? It's frustrating tbh.
LP Archetype Feedback
A Friend (Rating: 3/5) - "The core concept is solid and I can see your experience, but there are some obvious issues to clean up."
- Positive: Clear stage focus, specific location, concrete experience elements
- Negative: Over word limit (41 words), fund size mismatch with target, broad geography
- Positive: Clear stage focus, specific location, concrete experience elements
- Negative: Over word limit (41 words), fund size mismatch with target, broad geography
A High Net Worth Individual (Rating: 2/5) - "I'm interested in seed investing but need more confidence you can generate returns."
- Positive: Seed stage has good return potential, European market opportunity
- Negative: Secret sauce lacks quantified results, no mention of exit values or IRR
- Positive: Seed stage has good return potential, European market opportunity
- Negative: Secret sauce lacks quantified results, no mention of exit values or IRR
An Institutional LP (Rating: 2/5) - "The strategy feels unfocused and the track record isn't compelling enough for institutional capital."
- Positive: Fund size appropriate for seed stage
- Negative: Geographic scope too broad, unquantified experience, unprofessional presentation
- Positive: Fund size appropriate for seed stage
- Negative: Geographic scope too broad, unquantified experience, unprofessional presentation
